Each time the "where" or the "when" of your story changes, it's anticipated that you will reorient the reader as to location and time of day with a new slug line. It's sometimes considered poor form to use INT / EXT in combination in a slug line.
RESTAURANT", is a poor slug line in that it's neither explicit enough, nor detailed enough. "Would-be writers can, indeed, sit down and work when pressed to it.
Ah, the pain of getting on with your book. Click now for more stuff about book. Perhaps this may help next time you end up polishing doorhandles rather than sitting down to work. You Lie to oneself About Why You Can't Write The Book. You believe your stalling is about shortage of time, or too much pressure at work, or not enough solitude in the evening. But guess what? Chances are a deeper, darker reason may be at play, like 'I'm not meant to be larger than Mom' or 'What if this thing truly takes off?'. Occasionally when I coach writers in my Self-Help writer's Crash Course I may ask them what's impeding their progress. ( Glaringly , it's much more efficient to shoot all scenes happening in the same location at the same time. Ninety-nine p.c of the time, "DAY" or "NIGHT" will suffice. If action is "continuous" it should be obvious. We're going to be thrilled to have the above article released but first, please contact pemburgeraol.#end

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1. Kadi (anonymous), Feb 17, 2009 1:23:45 PM #
thanks for the tip :D